Comments for Poems from the Memory Bank

Comment on Roving by mavenmaker

mavenmaker — Wed, 25 Jun 2008 02:01:23 +0000

and the words come
sometimes with mindfullness
at other times they just escape from the page to join the others.

Thank you for your gift.

Daune

Comment on Roving by pearlz

pearlz — Tue, 17 Jun 2008 23:02:34 +0000

very delicately poised words (:

Comment on Butterflies on Rainbow beach by pearlz

pearlz — Tue, 17 Jun 2008 02:55:03 +0000

This is delightful !

Comment on Symbol by porchsitter

porchsitter — Sat, 14 Jun 2008 20:09:34 +0000

Nothing extraneous, just a few words that say so much. How I admire your talent. I bless trees and they bless me back. Storm coming–got to shut down the computer—love your sweet lady in pink.

Comment on Symbol by woodnymph

woodnymph — Mon, 02 Jun 2008 14:34:27 +0000

Trees are my friends. I talk to them, and you know what, they listen.

Comment on Symbol by cronelogical

cronelogical — Mon, 28 Apr 2008 02:01:47 +0000

Good show, Anita Marie, you’ve given me many a good chill! Fran

Comment on Symbol by Anita Marie

Anita Marie — Mon, 28 Apr 2008 01:12:17 +0000

Trees Scare Me.
In a good way
anita marie

Comment on Words for a lost love by lois daley

lois daley — Sat, 08 Mar 2008 01:38:21 +0000

I read again ” Words for a Lost Love”
deeply it resonates on this day the 8th March 2008.
You died this day some 4 years ago
It was swift ,no time to say goodbye to
your children
Sudden,no warning,no time to say sorry
Gone not knowing I do not hate
for this is a wasted feeling
I would say Sorry
Sorry you are gone
Sorry the children have lost their Father
Sorry your new loved one did not share
as many memories as I did
Sorry it had to be this way.
You will no longer wonder why
I will always wonder why
Until it is my time to say goodbye
But…this is what life is
Never knowing what comes in the next second,
minute,hour day or night.
It says enjoy the most of every precious day
Hurt not with words actions or deeds
Value humanity and all of life’s creatures
For we are all part of the same.
Rest peacefully
Lois ( Muse of the Sea) 8.3.2008

Comment on by andrew burke

andrew burke — Mon, 18 Feb 2008 08:11:02 +0000

Beautiful poem, Fran. Evocative - and it stops just where it should stop (a skill that’s hard to learn).

Comment on by Chefleur

Chefleur — Sun, 30 Dec 2007 11:41:38 +0000

My mum had a land lady when she was studying and mum had to sneak Dad in and out of her room… back in the days when no men were allowed inside. Lovely poem. So evocative and romantic.

Comment on Loss by Chefleur

Chefleur — Sun, 30 Dec 2007 11:38:44 +0000

So many images with so few words….so clever!!

Comment on A Cully Killmouseki tale by Chefleur

Chefleur — Sun, 30 Dec 2007 11:37:21 +0000

my dog is the same, she hates the wind and rain and always looks at me reproachfully when it is stormy out…which up here is often! She seems to be saying Why can’t you make it stop???

Comment on Loss by wordfield

wordfield — Sun, 30 Dec 2007 03:17:05 +0000

Hey, Fran!
Good to hear from you, and thanks for your generous comment on my small offering.

In the meantime, I hear “Loss” . . . a “darkling cave” indeed.

May the light be ever with you.
Bless,
Bill

Comment on Loss by espirit07

espirit07 — Fri, 28 Dec 2007 17:48:47 +0000

Fran, your words always reach deep into my soul and find a warm place for me to feel nourished. Blessings and thank you. Genece

Comment on Loss by woodnymph

woodnymph — Fri, 28 Dec 2007 15:34:01 +0000

A lovely poem, Fran. It’s beauty in in its simplicity…it tells a story in a few well chosen words.

I don’t know what time of day or night I was born. My mother always told me that she didn’t remember, but then, she would never talk about us…about family. Never knew her reasoning. I may be a child of night, because there are times when I seek dark spaces, but then there are times when I seek the light, so who knows?

Comment on Loss by cronelogical

cronelogical — Fri, 28 Dec 2007 04:41:44 +0000

Thank you all for visiting and for your warm thoughts. Fran

Comment on Loss by aletta mes

aletta mes — Fri, 28 Dec 2007 04:14:56 +0000

Iwas born inthe morning, breakfast, but have my entire life been a night owl.

Your poems and imagesare wonderful, I do enjoy spending some time her, A treat, Fran, a real treat.

Comment on A Cully Killmouseki tale by imogen88

imogen88 — Fri, 28 Dec 2007 03:40:38 +0000

Absolutely right, this is about felines.

Comment on Dusk by imogen88

imogen88 — Fri, 28 Dec 2007 03:39:41 +0000

Beautiful again, silent and still, yet so powerful.

Comment on Jacaranda season by imogen88

imogen88 — Fri, 28 Dec 2007 03:38:52 +0000

Beautiful and poignant, Fran.